Revenge Story Board

My story board isn't in the right order but it shows shots of extreme close ups as this trailer is going to be based on a drama ( real life situation) so to make it match to this genre i want to use these close ups because it would show the emotion and and expressions of the characters face and would interact with the audience more, also it would make the viewer feel sorry for protagonists in the trailer. there are 3 main characters in this film so it don't confuse the viewers and also to make the story a bit more complicated. every shot lasts about 3/4 seconds and they are flashes to make a real life effect for the trailer and i want it to be very dramatic. the story board is going to guide me to film my trailer the way i want it and it helps me to work around it but my story boards seems quiet infectious.